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Ecotourism is now defined as responsible travel to natural areas that conserves the environment. What are the advantages of ecotourism?

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It is widely considered that
ecotourism
 is a responsible
way
 of travelling with benefits both
nature
 and tourists.
This
 kind of journey requires a lot of time to plan which in my opinion is the main reason for its low popularity.
However
, upsides
such
 as being close to
nature
 and better socialisation with locals are simply not the
first
 people think about when they heard about
ecotourism
. So in
this
 article, I would like to represent all the hidden advantages it may have. Living in a modern world, we quite often forget about the time when we felt peace, so even when we take a holiday we visit places which are crowded.
However
,
ecotourism
 can show you tranquil and quiet places of untouched
nature
 where you can fully recover from the fast pace of life in a big city. It is one of the core principles of being an eco-tourist. You can enjoy all the terrific landscapes and if you are lucky you can be the
first
 man stepping into
this
 wild
nature
. Speaking about, good communication with locals can provide you with a lot of essential information which you can’t figure out by yourself. All these crucial tips should help you not only find out more about their culture but avoid dangerous or hazardous places as well. The locals like to tell tourists about their homeland in that
way
 they felt appreciated and the travellers improve the economical situation in that
way
 both benefits from it. In conclusion, I would like to underline that it is necessary for people to be close to
nature
, in that
way
 they can comprehend how dependent on
nature
 we are and that we should care about it more. The same must say about the diversity of cultures some of them need our help not to disappear, and
ecotourism
 is an answer to both.
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