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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this stagement.

#people #choices #disgree #stagement
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In
present
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 world, it is the belief of many
person
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people
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 that we are open to numerous options to choose from. Personally, I completely agree with
this
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 and I will be reasoning my stands in the subsequent paragraphs.
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 with, with the continuous development of humankind throughout the past years one can choose from multiple options from the very early stage of life. To be more specific, children of
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 world can decide whether
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the
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 want to attend
english
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 medium schools or general schools as there are plenty of schooling facilities available around them while fifty years ago it was not possible to give a
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 thought about schools as facilities were limited. Again, children or even adults can learn
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different
differernt
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different
 skills based on their
interest
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 simply from online courses which once was beyond imagination. Another point worth mentioning is that people are now more independent and
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 are more
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open-minded
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open minded
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. Individuals of
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 time are mostly career oriented and in most cases decisions regarding some issues like marriage, taking children etc. are taken by themselves whereas in previous years these were something that family members used to decide for the couple.
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, freedom of
choices
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choice
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 basically came from financial independency and breaking the conservative mindsets that once were not easily
achieveable
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achievable
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as a
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result
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 people used to be bounded by social restrictions. To conclude, it can be said that
persons
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 are now open to diverse opportunities due to the development of facilities over time and gaining freedom
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from social bindings.
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