Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory. Also, state your preference and say why you would choose that.

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A proportion of people think that living in a flat has plenty of
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rather than a university dormitory, but others argue that because disadvantages are more than the
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. In my opinion, even with plenty of responsibilities and high costs, living in an apartment might be preferable because it provides self-education for life basics and gives freedom more than a dorm house would. Living in a flat is very popular in present days by academy students but sometimes they miss out on how many responsibilities they take on
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as cleaning the house by themselves, living in the same apartment complex with families, shopping and no need the decline that the high cost of utilities, rent of flats and other prices. Dormhouses decreased their costs by increasing the population in the same shared place and with university support funds, but if you want to live separately, you have to stand by yourself.
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, living outside of university provides some
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as you can select your own living partner, you can go in and out without breaking rules, you decide your own rules at your flat and more important you can do whatever you want whenever you want.
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, living separately would ensure you
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prepare for daily life basics
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as cleaning, cooking, and shopping and the most compelling argument is time management. As a piece of evidence, all educational institution students will live by themselves in the future life eventually, and
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is a good way to be ready for it. To put it in a simple way, both decisions have
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and disadvantages, but youngs must choose based on their preferences with considering all views about it
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as responsibilities, utilities from facilities and support from their families or institutions. As a human who wants to feel a sense of freedom and likes to stand on their own feet, even though it's negative sides, living separately is preferable for my standards and I believe that all tough conditions can be affordable.
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