Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In recent years, due to the development of social media, the private lives of popular people became well-explored among youngsters.

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overwhelming amount of information may cause some harm to kids’ mental.

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is not always the case as there were several instances of stars motivating youth to achieve their aims. As regards the negative effect, in some situations celebrities are not to blame. It is not a secret that human beings tend to discuss others'

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, so modern mass media makes an accent on showing stars'

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, to get more attention among the readers. Eventually, it harms both celebrities and ordinary people.

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, certain channels cover the lives of successful people, especially athletes, who faced hardships along their growth, and it may serve adolescents as an inspiration.

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, popular mixed martial arts fighter Khabib Nurmagamedov, who was born in a small village in Russia, became the best in

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field through his dedication and hard work. To sum up, excessive coverage of notorious personalities by news channels became a common fact nowadays. And some believe that it is harmful to kids' unmatured mental. Despite

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benefits of media coverage so it may light up the lives of individuals who could spark a fire in the hearts of the young generation.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Celebrity culture
Glamorization
Unrealistic expectations
Self-esteem
Scandals
Role models
Moral development
Mental health
Influence
Exposure
Social media platforms
Charity work
Inappropriate behavior
Perfection image
Negative impact
Inspire children

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

the first impression you have of a person is the best way to judge a person. do you agree?

some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree views and express your own opinion

Some parents are worried about increasing levels of violence in TV,Video games and other entertainments for Children's leisure. how does this affects the children? how do you think this can be tackled?