Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the continuous improvement of urban

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.Most

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reckon that ought to improve

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by increasing the minimum legal age for driving

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and motorcycles.I agree with

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opinion and I will elaborate on

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problem from the perspective of accident incidence and the dangerous driving behaviour of senior

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!

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of all.Senior

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don’t have perfect awareness of the law and a sense of Social responsibility.

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will lead to a frequent phenomenon that senior

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will ignore laws and not care about the

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of others.Gradually,there will be more dangerous situations in all of the

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systems.

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,underage senior

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drive

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or motorcycles on a road with a Speed limit of 60 kilometres per hour and ignore the

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regulations to reach a higher speed.

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action could give rise to car accidents and even some

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were injured.As well as bring badness and property damage to both families.

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,The happiness index of

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will decline

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and Accident incidents will be an upward trend.Certainly ,that’s so unfeasible!

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.senior citizen always overestimates their driving ability by themselves,Underestimate the dangers on the road，Unable to make a correct judgement in emergencies, as a

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result senior citizen does not have enough experience.senior

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usually listen to music , chat, and watch movies.playing iPhone With friends in the car.so that cannot focus on driving

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.if an accident occurs.a senior citizen can’t even react.sometimes senior

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will imitate dangerous plots in the movie.they imagine themselves as the protagonist in the movie and drive at high speed!as well as regardless of the feelings of others! To sum up.

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legal awareness and social ,security responsibility are not perfect for senior

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.and they maybe have some dangerous behaviour. so that it has a certain impact on

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.I hold a firm belief that to solve the problem of improving

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the best way is to increase the minimum legal age for driving

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and motorists!