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Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the increasing amount of
traffic
 accident have caused many deaths and injuries. Some people think that if
government
 increase the minimum legal age for driving, road safety will be improved. I disagree with the opinion and
i
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 consider that some more significant policies leading to safety should be set by the
government
.
Although
 there is an element of truth in the opinion, the impulse younger invariably drives faster than the steady older indeed .,
However
 Overspeed is a mere partial reason giving rise to
traffic
 accidents.
Nevertheless
,if the
government
 increase the minimum legal age for driving cars,it will cause those who should have had the right to drive to not have, which will make trouble for them in daily life. On one hand , I think the
government
 should extend the time when the learners are trained in driving school to improve their driving skills, for better driving skills will make them become more experienced. Needless to say, the more experienced the drivers are the fewer
traffic
 accidents will occur, which had been confirmed by experts from the
traffic
 department.
For instance
, if an emergency circumstance happened on the motorway , a new driver would bewilder,contributing to
a
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terrible consequences. On another hand, the
government
 should set a special policy to limit tired driving severely , for the reason that according to the statistics almost half-serious accidents happening on highways were caused by the exhausted driver who had been steering for several hours .
for example
, a person having driven three hours must come to a halt for a rest and a trucker cannot drive on the highway after 3 am. I think
the
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road safety will improve if these policies are launched by the
government
.
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