As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

Major metropolises around the world are experiencing dramatic growth.

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member

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of society and some ways to solve them. Rapidly growing cities cases two major issues for young people. The most serious is that youths face

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employed

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job. It happens due to discrimination in

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market based on

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the perception

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that young people are less competent workers. The

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is unaffordable housing. According to the latest poll, 90

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of youths couldn’t find a budget flat or house that employers can afford. It is clearly seen, that young people struggle with

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issues

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as job

vacancy

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vacancies

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and renting accommodation.

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can be solved by employers and

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. As for

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can be solved by dividing large projects into several tasks that will give

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raise to

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of more

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suggestions.

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, young workers can gain experience in

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by taking part in large projects and of

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make

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money. As for

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issue,it can be solved by

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adjustments. Government should provide a scheme of rental control

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to limit rents.

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, the authority can set up a proportion of rent

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on salary. In conclusion, it should be admitted that

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of jobs and housing suggestions causes by

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growth of cities. By providing

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part time

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jobs and

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from employers and

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these problems could be easily solved.