In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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paper investigates the degree to which we should challenge global issues, Linking Words
such
as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. Some think it is the sole responsibility of the police to deal with crimes that are a product of these issues, while others believe that everyone has their part to play.
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To begin
with, many consider the government to have absolute power and authority. Linking Words
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, people Linking Words
expects
them to reduce criminal activities, no matter the cause. Change the verb form
expect
For example
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this
may include a mother stealing a loaf of bread from her local grocery store in order to feed her famished children. Of course, she would be held accountable according to the law; Linking Words
nevertheless
, the government is Linking Words
also
at fault for not supporting her and members of the community could have provided help.
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However
, there are instances where the police would be required, Linking Words
such
as managing football riots or dealing with abuse. That said, many would argue that these instances are a product of alcohol and drug abuse. Society requires wider structures of assistance in order to reduce Linking Words
such
eventualities.
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Therefore
, I disagree that causes of crime, Linking Words
such
as hunger, should only be handled by professional and trained officers. Linking Words
Instead
, everyone can play a role in tackling worldwide issues; Linking Words
for instance
, reducing university costs would make education more accessible to the poor. Linking Words
In addition
, equal rights for all groups would mean that there is a lower Linking Words
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percentage
percetange
of joblessness Correct your spelling
percentage
amongst
minority groups.
In conclusion, authorities are integral when it comes to managing lawlessness and should aid in keeping the community safe from harm. Change preposition
among
Nevertheless
, there are many factors that lead to illegal actions. All of societyLinking Words
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worldwide should play their part in lessening Remove the comma
apply
such
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