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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In recent years, the number of
people
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 who learn a foreign
language
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 increased over time.
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, some believe that either going abroad or working abroad is the only reason why
people
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 want to learn a foreign
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, others think that there are some reasons for learning a new
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. I am inclined to believe that studying a
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language
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 provides
people
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 with a new perception and international jobs opportunity.
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, speaking a new
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 enables
people
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 to a new approach.
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, communicating with individuals who speak a different
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 allows you to understand what they are thinking.
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, you can adopt a fresh perspective.
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, Greta Thunberg who is a climate activist
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 can speak both her
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 and English. Because the protests are held in English, they reach more
people
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 and give them a new perspective.
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, thanks to modern technology, there are many global companies. Clearly, when
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 company hires applicants, it looks at whether they can speak a foreign
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.
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, if
people
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 who graduated media department cannot speak a new
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, companies do not to prefer work with them. To conclude,
people
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 get new perspectives and opportunities for international employment by learning a
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language
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 so travelling to or working in a foreign country is not the only reason for
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.
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, it is predictable that the number of
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 who speak a
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language
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 will increase over time.
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