The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed that the most efficient method to improve prevailing transport and

traffic

situations is to persuade citizens living in the rural areas or the suburbs to accommodate in the nearby

cities

. I entirely agree with

this

approach because

this

will reduce the

number

of traffics connecting the rustic zones to the main city and

also

save valuable working hours that could be wasted

otherwise

.

Firstly

, accommodating rustic dwellers in the nearby

cities

will cut the

number

of traffics entering

into

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the business hubs and contribute

in

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solving heavy

traffic

problems. As a

number

of

people

living in the countryside need to go to the towns frequently for personal as well as official reasons, an increasing mode of

transportations

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are

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required to fulfil

such

demand.

As a result

, governing authority permits a significant

number

of light as well as heavy motor vehicles to run on rural and

suburb

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roads linking the major

cities

.

This

in

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turn, deteriorates the

traffic

situations

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of

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the city. Admittedly, encouraging

people

to reside in

such

cities

will

also

save their valuable income that could be wasted on frequent travelling towards

cities

via various

transports

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.

Secondly

, moving

people

in the

cities

from the suburbs or the countryside will help in increasing working hours significantly that could be lost predominantly due to time wasted in unwanted

traffic

jams.

For example

,

a

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statistics published in a popular newspaper on the

traffic

jam

of

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a well-known Asian country have shown that office-going persons frequently tend to lose

significant

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portion of working hours sitting in transports that

stuck

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in

traffic

jams occurring just before entering the main roads of the major

cities

. For

this

reason, they can’t concentrate properly on office assignments which harms their overall monthly performances. If these individuals can live

next

to their workstations situated in major business

centers

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, they won’t face

such

horrendous circumstances in future. In conclusion, I strongly agree that accommodating

people

from the suburbs or the countryside in the

cities

will quickly solve

traffic

and transport problems solely due to

reduction

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in incoming vehicles from the rural areas and

vital

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enhancement of actual working times.