There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
These days having a family with
less
members is popular in manifold countries . Of course, Change the quantifier
fewer
this
idea involves either benefits or disadvantages . Linking Words
In other words
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quality of life is a great matter in new societies, so in Correct article usage
the logical
this
essay, I investigate the consequences of being in a Linking Words
less
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apply
population
Clan.
On the one hand, having a smaller family is Replace the word
populated
consider
to make a better quality of living. If parents born just one child, they would financially support him more than the couple who have many children. Wrong verb form
considered
Although
, the average of their salary is an essential issue which Linking Words
effect
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effects
on
their life. Take establishing Change preposition
apply
in
a Change preposition
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distinguish
school for an example; pupils who are going to Change the form of the verb
distinguished
the
modern and expensive schools, Correct article usage
apply
they
are going to be more valued. Correct pronoun usage
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Thus
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majority
of them are capable of having a bright future. Correct article usage
the majority
On the other hand
, in a small clan, parents have enough time to spend with their children. Linking Words
In other words
, because of the economic problems, both parents require to have Linking Words
occupationts
in order to provide suitable facilities for the households nowadays. While they spend Correct your spelling
occupations
occupation
throughout
their daily hours at work, they have approximate hours for keeping in touch with their daughters and sons. Obviously, the less the family is large, the more the children have Change preposition
apply
private
Add an article
a private
moment
in order to be with their mother and father.
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moments
Furthermore
, there are some advantages of being in a large household. Linking Words
Such
as being able to communicate with siblings or uncles or aunts. If having Linking Words
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only baby will continue to be a trend , Correct article usage
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next
generation would not be capable of understanding the meaning of a complete extended family. Correct article usage
the next
However
, the countless positive points of being the only baby Linking Words
is
not ignorable . In many countries Change the verb form
are
specially
the poorer ones, it is absolutely common to live in a great tribe . Replace the word
especially
For example
, Linking Words
huge
population of Add an article
a huge
the huge
Africa's
countries are suffering from whether financial or nutrition poverty.
In conclusion, many Change noun form
Africa
mankinds
who are inhabited in upgraded nations believe that to born Correct your spelling
mankind
less
babies caused a lot of benefits. To sum up, Change the quantifier
fewer
limited
economy, these days, does not allow Correct article usage
a limited
the
humans to increase the members of their dynasties. If human Correct article usage
apply
being
pay attention to Fix the agreement mistake
beings
this
rational point , they would simply protect their dynasty whether in nourishment or economical fieldsLinking Words
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