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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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In the
last
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 100 years , there are many inventions occur which improve the life of human beings throughout the
world
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 ,,
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 one discovery which really supports my country's people is easy and ready access to
internet
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 facilities.
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 facility connects everyone throughout the
world
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 and makes the
world
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 a global village.
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, the easiest mode of communication is the telephone.
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, when
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 telephone is connected to the
internet
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 ,people can communicate throughout the
world
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 with their loved ones at anywhere and anytime.
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, people can work online in other countries which
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 their financial status and bring prosperity to the country.
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, media plays a pivotal role in today's personal life.Through
internet
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 access individual keeps herself/himself updated about the latest updates happening in the
world
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 which helps him/her to take decisions
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. Satellite informs us about the weather, research, navigation etc and it is only the
internet
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 connection which supports and conveys information. In the end, it is only an
internet
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 connection which connects everyone in the
world
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 and surely it is one of the biggest inventions of the 21st century.
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