many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. what do you think are the causes of this? what possible solutions can you suggest?

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prison is a place useful to educate people that had

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committed

commited

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committed

mistakes. Yet some prisoners commit a

crime

once again after they are released from

jail

.

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with, one of the possible

cause

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that an ex-prisoner commit a

crime

again could be the fact that the penalty is not severe enough. To explain, cottiming a

crime

the individual will be in charge of

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punishment, so, when he considers it acceptable ,it appears a great possibility to break the law again.

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, if an individual has already been imprisoned for a certain period and knows that the life inside there is not awful, he will probably commit another

crime

.

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, for many people that are released after

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period

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of imprisonment is difficult to adapt the society again

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, the

jail

is

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as a comfort zone. Moving

further

, since penalties play a

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role

for

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avoiding crimes, one solution could be

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up different rules and regulations solely for ex-prisoners. To elaborate, as mentioned above, ex-criminals might consider

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predetermined

punishment as not severe enough.

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,

stabilishing

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establishing

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a heavier

guel

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fuel

might be a feasible solution, an idea could be that for

second-time

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lawbreaker his guel will duplicate as well.

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,

if

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for the

first

time the period in

the

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jail

should be 5

year

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, but for the

second

time

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it will increase to 10 years. In conclusion, it's a fact that many prisoners

commits

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a

crime

as soon as they are released from

jail

.

Therefore

, the government should pay more attention

on

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this

phenomenon in order to avoid

this

happens.

However

, setting up proper rules for criminals is an effective way to solve the problem.