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All levels of education, from primary to higher education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Education
 should be free to individuals of all key stages in the country and the government should bear the expense. I mostly agree with the statement that it is the government's responsibility to provide free
education
 ,
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university ,level students should pay the fee for their specialized field.
Firstly
, as people are coming from different financial backgrounds ,
therefore
 it is not possible for everyone to pay the
education
 fee of their lad and
this
 will bring up a society of complex and underprivileged people.
Furthermore
, as
education
 will open your eyes and broaden your vision, the less educated public in society will not be able to contribute to the prosperity of the country .
Therefore
, schooling should be free for people to create a better society.
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