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Some group of people have benefited from modern communications technology but some people do not have benefit at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times,
technology
 is advancing with leaps and bounces. The latest inventions,
such
 as smartphones have proven to be among the biggest achievements in the history of mankind. Keeping in mind the current and past advancements, some
people
 agree that communication
technology
 has undoubtedly made connections easier.
On the other hand
, some groups of
people
 could not even enjoy the perks that come with it. Written communication has been replacing Telegrams with Email and verbal communication is becoming more easier.
For example
, a person sitting in England can video call a person sitting in Pakistan easily. Not only
this
 but the corporate sector is getting the most out of
this
technology
 as we saw during the time of COVID, most companies were working online or remotely. All the training, as well as meetings, were being held online which not only saved employees medically but
also
 saved their time, money and commutation. There are certain demerits too as personal space and privacy is compromised due to internet hacking and other situations.
Also
 the old age
people
 and not too tech-savvy so they felt left out which raised their frustration too. The recent tech is
also
 a little costly due to which the
people
 who are trying very hard to make a living can't afford
this
 luxury. To Conclude, I must pen that Some groups of
people
 have benefited from modern communications
technology
 but some
people
 do not benefit at all, as I have stated that old
people
, as well as those who can't ,
afford
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern communications technology
  • global connectivity
  • remote work
  • digital divide
  • e-commerce
  • socioeconomic status
  • geography
  • impersonal
  • face-to-face communication
  • over-reliance
  • cyberbullying
  • misinformation
  • privacy concerns
  • tech-savvy
  • health implications
  • eye strain
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