You child is going on a school trip overseas for week. The Headmaster is looking for parents to join the trip. Write a letter to state that you would like to join it. In your letter: Mention why you would like to join the trip. Ask some general questions about the trip. Mention how you can be helpful.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to show my interest in accompanying my daughter on her school trip to Europe, which is arranged by you for students from the secondary section. The reason for joining me is that my daughter has never been abroad without me. She wants me to come with her so that she feels safe and secure.

Moreover

, I

also

wish to see Europe and enjoy its beautiful scenery as I am very fond of nature and greenery. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with some information about the trip so that I pack my luggage

accordingly

For instance

, how is the weather there and are there any water activitivities

such

as deep sea diving or paragliding?

Last

but not the least, I would like to offer any assistance you need for the trip.

Furthermore

, I can supervise students, help other teachers in keeping an eye on children and manage the daily short trips to different locations. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural enrichment
educational experience
personal interest
itinerary
accommodation
roles and responsibilities
safety measures
emergency procedures
medical and disciplinary issues
first aid certification
language proficiency
volunteer experience
group management
supervision
schedule adherence
pre-trip preparations
post-trip follow-up
photo sharing
event recap

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