Do you think Corruption has become world wide issue ? What steps we can take to control corruption ?

In the recent world, we often see news about unlawful

bribe giving

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and collusion between public servants and private companies.

This

is a problem of not only for

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particular

pariticular

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particular

countries

or regions,

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however

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it is becoming an issue all over the world. I would like to discuss

this

critical subject in our society and go on to propose some suggested

method

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methods

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for

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a solution

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solution

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to avoid corruption in the days to come.

First

of all,

collusions

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collusion

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committed by politicians and industrial leaders

is

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not a subject only in developing

countries

but

also

in developed

countries

nowadays.

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, the recent Olympic games in Japan

unfortunately

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became a trigger to a huge scandal related to an illegal payoff made by a local manufacturer to a leader of a famous consultant

agencie

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agencies

agency

. We see similar news almost

everyday

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in other parts of the world.

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, I would like to discuss some

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countermeasures

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counter measures

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countermeasures

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to prevent

this

kind of illegal

conducts

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. Probably, the

first

and the most important remedy is to stop a situation that one person in any industry or governmental body

obtain

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too much power concentrating him or her.

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, society

need

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appropriate monitoring systems that can closely investigate any big projects involving

huge

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amount of investment and can quickly alert when an ambiguous fund transfer occurs.

Lastly

but equally important, institutions which have chances to be engaged in these types of events should give their employees repeated

trainings

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and remind

what

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is right and what is not. In conclusion, the issue of criminal collisions

are

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not

the

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problem of the past for many

countries

these days.

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, I believe, by avoiding

concentration

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the concentration

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of power, implementing

appropriate

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monitoring system, and giving work force needed

trainings

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training

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,

this

critical issue can be reduced in future.