In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the near future, human beings

don’t

have to drive

cars

or trunks

any more

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. The only thing we need to do is

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on the seats.

Although

self-driving spends a penny,

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don’t

think it is a good idea to totally rely on driverless

cars

. There is no doubt that we can benefit a lot from self-driving.

First

, technology is more intelligent than humans.

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, they can keep the data up to date and arrange a better route for us.

Therefore

there is

lower

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risk

for

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to be

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stuck in a traffic jam.

Second

, driverless vehicles are a good option for those drunk citizens. It is reported that the number of people who die of traffic accidents is much higher than those who suffer from

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attack

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each year.

Lastly

, we would have more time for

personal

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life if the car is operated by the driving system.

However

, self-driving

have

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many drawbacks.

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, many residents who

don’t

have a qualification can earn a living by driving. There will be

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higher unemployment if we

don’t

need

workforce

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for transport. What is more, it is likely for us to meet some special occasion like extreme weather or accidents. The self-driving is not able to deal with these problems because scientists have limited statistics when designing the system.

Last

but not least, it takes lots of money to invent driverless

cars

and

then

put them

into

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the market.

As a result

, the

cars

will be sold at a high price that many common residents can not afford to buy

one

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. For the reasons

present

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above, I strongly believe that

self driving

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brings more

weakness

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weaknesses

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than merits to

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society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

281 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The process of producing drinking water by solar powered pump and filter

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The provided illustration presents a comparison of the number of male and female participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012, as well as the overall number of participants over the same period.