In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the near future, human beings
don’t
have to drive
cars
or trunks
any more
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. The only thing we need to do is
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on the seats.
Although
self-driving spends a penny,
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don’t
think it is a good idea to totally rely on driverless
cars
. There is no doubt that we can benefit a lot from self-driving.
First
, technology is more intelligent than humans.
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, they can keep the data up to date and arrange a better route for us.
Therefore
there is
lower
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risk
for
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us
to be
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stuck in a traffic jam.
Second
, driverless vehicles are a good option for those drunk citizens. It is reported that the number of people who die of traffic accidents is much higher than those who suffer from
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attack
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each year.
Lastly
, we would have more time for
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life if the car is operated by the driving system.
However
, self-driving
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many drawbacks.
For example
, many residents who
don’t
have a qualification can earn a living by driving. There will be
a
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higher unemployment if we
don’t
need
workforce
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for transport. What is more, it is likely for us to meet some special occasion like extreme weather or accidents. The self-driving is not able to deal with these problems because scientists have limited statistics when designing the system.
Last
but not least, it takes lots of money to invent driverless
cars
and
then
put them
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the market.
As a result
, the
cars
will be sold at a high price that many common residents can not afford to buy
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. For the reasons
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above, I strongly believe that
self driving
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brings more
weakness
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than merits to
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society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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