Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, whcih causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugae. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the
foods
which are readily available include cool drinks that possess high sugar levels, which is the main cause of many diseases, some
people
argue, in order to reduce consumption it is suggested that these
foods
should be prohibitively expensive. I disagree with the statement
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because
food
is the primary requirement of human beings which should not infringe
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making it excess price and I believe in order to motivate
people
to consume
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such
product to increase awareness regarding the consequences. foodstuff is the primary requirement of every mankind
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if
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is not affordable to an average citizen that will be the most detrimental effect than health issues,
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even prices are high when
people
tend to have
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snack because of the taste. For ,instance in a survey conducted by Economy university students regarding
this
, it is found that
food
prices are not at all affect
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consumption habits.
Thus
I believe that when
food
price is increased there is no effect on the intake. The best option to mitigate these
food
habits is to increase the knowledge about the long-term side effects of
such
foods
.
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individuals are less keen to eat or drink
such
products which not only help them to stay healthy but
also
save a lot of money ,
furthermore
it is the government's responsibility to control ads and glucose levels in the
food
. For ,example , in ,Canada there are special Television channels that make
people
aware of the
food
side effects and long time health problems.
Hence
I believe that increasing awareness will automatically decrease consumption. In conclusion, I believe it is not viable to option to expensive
foods
that may affect some
people
below the poverty line. the best thing is to encourage
people
to get more knowledge on the effects.
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