You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that some parts of items disappear in my computer's accessories that I purchased before travelling. I bought a MacBook laptop and the colour of
this
computer is silver.
In addition
, I purchased it in the Apple store in the Richmond Center
last
Friday, and it should be attached to a wireless mouse.
Besides
, it
also
obliges to include a laptop case in
this
box. After settling down in the hotel, I took out the computer to recharge the power and discovered that the wireless mouse was not inside the box.
Furthermore
, I remember the sales representative said that he put the receipt in the box, but I did not find it. I would like to request a wireless mouse delivery by an international package to my current accommodation and
also
reprint a receipt that can attach to
this
package to me. Since I would utilize
this
newly purchased laptop the following week, I hope you can deliver
first
-class mail to me. I look forward to hearing your urgent response regarding my requirement and hope
this
is an excellent customer service experience. Yours Faithfully, Claire Chen
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