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You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter say how you found out about the plans explain what problems your neighborhood will face suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you
express
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 my dissatisfaction
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authority’s
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 decision to construct a new
airport
 near to
Gotri
area
. Recently I
was
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discovered while reading the Times of India newspaper that the new
airport
 is being planned in Gorti near to
lackside
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lakeside
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lack side
area
 and I was very surprised about
central
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 authority’s decision for
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selection
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the selectoin
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selectoin
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selection
 of site. Kindly note that
this
area
 is
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residential
recedential
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a recedential
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area
 and there is a primary school just in front of
Gotri
 lack,
hence
 loud
noice
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noise
of
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airplanes
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 will disturb students and local citizens.
In addition
, the roads of
gotri
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the gotri
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area
 are
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four lane
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 roads and there is no space for future expansion of the roads, so
this
 will
further
 worsen the traffic
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congestion
congustion
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consumption
.
Instead
, I recommend
to plan
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 the
airport
at
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in
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Sevasi
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the Sevasi
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area
 which is a
suburb
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area
 5km away from
Gotri
,
also
 there are plenty of
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government
govenment
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government
 lands are
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available
avaiable
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available
 there,
thus
airport
 and road expansions could be planned easily. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Manoj Pandya
Submitted by manojmpandya on

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