You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter say how you found out about the plans explain what problems your neighborhood will face suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you

express

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my dissatisfaction

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authority’s

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decision to construct a new

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near to

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area

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. Recently I

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discovered while reading the Times of India newspaper that the new

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is being planned in Gorti near to

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lakeside

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area

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and I was very surprised about

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authority’s decision for

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selection

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of site. Kindly note that

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area

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residential

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and there is a primary school just in front of

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loud

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noise

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airplanes

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will disturb students and local citizens.

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, the roads of

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roads and there is no space for future expansion of the roads, so

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worsen the traffic

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congestion

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consumption

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, I recommend

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the

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the Sevasi

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which is a

suburb

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5km away from

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also

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there are plenty of

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government

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government

lands are

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available

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available

there,

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airport

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and road expansions could be planned easily. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Manoj Pandya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

168 words

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