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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. Tg what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Those days all
people
 visit other
countries
 for vacation. Some
people
 think that
this
 travel will have a bad effect on the
countries
. I think a trip to any country for any person is very beneficial for
people
 . I will elaborate on my point in the following paragraphs. There are many
countries
 and nations in the world and believe it is very important to be in touch with these nations. Being
qualified
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 person is not easy, but seeing new
countries
 and cultures is one of the requirements. A person who has experienced many trips to other
countries
 has a broad mind and learns things that others do not know.
For instance
, my sister has
traveled
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travelled
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 to many
countries
, and now her
world-view
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worldview
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 is very broad and very different from other
people
. I think there are many positive aspects of travel.
On the other hand
, in the 20th century,
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mankind
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man kind
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mankind
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 faced many dangers like diseases,
terrorism
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and terrorism
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 and
traveling
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travelling
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 to other
countries
 was considered dangerous.
For example
, at the beginning of 2020, the world faced a virus called COVID. Which had many consequences for the whole world. In search
contions
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conditions
, it is inevitable that
people
 with get sick and sometimes have serious consequences. In conclusion, if there is no war between different castes or states, visiting other
countries
 will not affect the
countries
 negatively
on
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 the contrary, I believe that it is very useful for each member state.
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