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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter, explain why you are organising the party describe what you are planning to do say why you want your friend to come to the party

#friend #party
I am ecstatic to invite you for my 30th birthday which I am going to organise at my home and I am
also
 super excited to see all of my friends there as
this
 will be something different unlike other parties as I am going to introduce my better half at the party. As you know, how I will plan a party if commit anything.
This
 is going to be a mesmerizing event with mouthwatering food items and spectacular dance shows too.
In addition
, we may witness the mind-blowing latest design creations and competitions planned to conduct by an enormous firm and
last
 unlimited fun and many more throughout the night without sleep. I wish you are so lucky to see all of these lifetime memories as we cannot find everything in one place.
Furthermore
, they are going to arrange decent accommodation free of cost along with lavish facilities. what else we need to have fun in our life.
Hence
, I would request you to please plan
accordingly
 to be there at my home. I cannot wait anymore to see you. If required I will come down and Pick you up at the airport. Best regards, Lakshmi.
Submitted by lakshma999 on

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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