Some people say it's a waste of time to plan for the future. We should live in the present. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that
plan
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your
future
it's a waste of time, they think that should only
concentrating
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on the present
,
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because it's more crucial. But
i
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I
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think that if a person wants a good real one, he
need
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to plan his
future
. In
this
essay,
i
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will explain why
i
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disagree with
this
notion.
Firstly
, individuals usually set goals to bring contentment in their
life
and they are focusing
in
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on
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their current moment to achieve them.
Although
, set a goal to bring very good results.
For instance
, if a person is sad or if he has no energy at all to do his work,
then
they can immediately think about their
future
and the goals that they need to achieve, and
this
will help them in their current
a
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life
good
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results and success.
Secondly
, if set yourself
is
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very clear goals,
then
need to
competenly
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competently
completely
understand your work and be
best
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version of yourself.
Therefore
, you must always arouse admiration and self-confidence in order to see yourself
future
. I think that living only in the present
life
will bring failure and
this
is
fault
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the fault
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of the parents who
growed
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grew
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their children without attention to their
future
and
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already the children can not imagine
your
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their
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future
life
or dream because they are afraid of the results.
In other words
,
such
people can
be explain
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not to achieve in
life
,
therefore
, they will always admire other people. In conclusion, need to always be free and have your own opinion in real
life
in order to build a comfortable
futurefor
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future for
yourself because time runs fast and
future
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the future
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is not that far away.
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