You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house.when you returned home. You discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like , where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

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Dear Tim, I hope you are going well. I am writing

this

letter to you to request you help me to send my

coat

back. I am very thankful to you that I stayed at your house and spent

very

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nice weekend. I still remember that we

fidhing

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fishing

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and cooked together and made a fantastic meal. Unfortunately, when I get my home, I notice that I forgot my

coat

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your house. I wanted to call you but my cellphone is in my

coat

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that

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I have to write

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letter to you. I believe that I put my

coat

on the sofa which

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your living room. Because after dinner we sit on that sofa and watched

moive

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movie

movies

together. I felt hot so I take off my

coat

and

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throw

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it on the sofa. The

coat

blue

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colour

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with

zip

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in front of it. A jazz band picture on the back, so I think you can find it easily. Inside the

coat

, my

cellphone

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and my wallet will be in the left pocket. If you find it, please send it back to me. I suggest that you can take it to my classroom tomorrow morning because I will be there all

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morning. I am looking forward to

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receive

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response

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response

, thank you so much. Best regards, Kevin

Submitted by kevin. B on Fri Nov 11 2022

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
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although
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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

221 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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