Air travel has become cheaper than before. Some think it is a positive development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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in healthcare systems which need to give nurse-patient communication top priority on a strategic and economic level in order to deliver care
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really patient-centred and to be an effective participant in therapeutic processes, the nurse must gain the essential information based on the evidence to deal with a patient’s distress. Depending on evidence-based practices ensure that implementing an intervention of using a smartphone or playing a video game on a tablet as a distraction whereas the child focuses on the device and ignores his surrounding area; is an effective method to decrease the anxiety level. Low and Pittaway(2008, cited in Uyar, 2021,pp.573-575)
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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