Many would argue that scientific research requires a degree of oversight from the relevant governmental authorities. In my opinion, properly handled, this is a sensible and necessary policy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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benefits and drawbacks of constant observation of scientific
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of money for scientific works.
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with
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officials. Authorities could assign enough budgets to scientific works in different fields.
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, it should be mentioned that universities are not allowed to allocate some budgets for a specific field according to their personal opinion and it could restrain
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of different
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, the more money will be allocated the more progress will be in various
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of science. Another
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great aspect of
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is setting strong rules related to
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In fact, authorities legislate rules that patients have the right to be aware of experiments
such
as testing a new vaccine or medication. In the nutshell,
scientists
can not test patience without their permission.
Additionally
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,the most important issue is
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a restriction
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of
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For instance
, in some religious countries, authorities do not allow
scientists
to carry out
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research
in genetic engineering because of controversial and ethical beliefs. Despite the fact that development in
this
field may result in new treatments for some diseases. To summarise, it is better for
scientists
to conduct
research
under
government
supervision, because it gives
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to finance projects, establishes certain rules at the legislative level and
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illegality.
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,
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has a positive influence on
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on
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science. After
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analysis
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subject, it is predicted significant improvement in science with support
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