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In most countries disabled people are not catered for adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disabled people. Discuss.

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citizen
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 deserted due to the city that cannot
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of
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population. So the government need charities and voluntary
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firms
frims
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firms
 to provide donation and assistance. On one hand, the amount of population is increasing while
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 of the world is
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 down.
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, old buildings in
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 are built for
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 of family and cannot respond to the number of family members raising.
In addition
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, the presence of
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separating
seperating
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separating
 of levels in society is blocking opportunity of the individuals.
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 cause to more people are abandoned and become homeless in most countries. A good illustration of
this
 is more and more people in India are deserted due to
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separating
seperating
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 of levels.
On the other hand
, the government need help from numerous populations who
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effort
afford
affort
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afford
donation
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 or provide other
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assistance
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assistances
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assistance
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 to
homeless
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 or people who need help To conclude, the world is facing
with
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the
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 population that increasing
more over
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. So the government and
citizen
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citizens
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 who can
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afford
affort
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 should be
co-operating
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 to provide assistance and money to individuals who
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abandoned
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abandoned
abandonned
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