Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A group of people thought that the biggest issue human has to cope with is the
disappear
of many plants and Replace the word
disappearance
animals
, while others argued that there are several environmental problems need
to be resolved. I consider Correct pronoun usage
that need
that
loss of forests and Correct determiner usage
the
animals
just a small part of the huge natural difficulty.
First
of all, there is no argument that one big problem human has to faced
Change the form of the verb
face
with
is losing many plants and creatures due to uncontrolled deforestation Change preposition
apply
for
landscape and or agriculture. Many wild Change preposition
of
animals
were hunted illegally; moreover
, few exist forests
suitable for them to survive. Change preposition
in forests
For example
, according to research done by environmental
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an environmental
activist
in Australia, wild species had reduced significantly over a decade. If the governments did not give any solution for Fix the agreement mistake
activists
this
problem, rare animals
would go extinct in less than 20 years.
On the other hand
, I believe that there are several serious issues related to nature that people have to deal with. Global warming, air
and water pollution are the crucial troubles people have to concern Correct word choice
and air
on
. All of these problems are caused by many reasons and human activities. Change preposition
about
Firstly
, deforestation contributes a small part; however
, the main reason is the speed of industrialization is too fast. Many manufacture
factories were built, Replace the word
manufacturing
Correct word choice
and this
this
leads to a huge amount of greenhouse gas released Correct pronoun usage
which
to
the atmosphere. According to the estimates by scientists at Cornell University in the US, with the pace of industrialization now, Change preposition
into
average
temperature of the Earth will reach the mark Add an article
the average
an average
100
degrees Fahrenheit soon. After that, ice in two poles may Change preposition
of 100
melted
dramatically, leading to unpredictable consequences.
In conclusion, humanity Change the verb form
melt
be melted
have
to find solutions for many environmental troubles Change the verb form
has
such
as losing creatures or global warming. Therefore
, governments need practical action immediately.Submitted by namkhanh.tran2310 on
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