Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A group of people thought that the biggest issue human has to cope with is the

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of many plants and

animals

, while others argued that there are several environmental problems

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to be resolved. I consider

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loss of forests and

animals

just a small part of the huge natural difficulty.

First

of all, there is no argument that one big problem human has to

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is losing many plants and creatures due to uncontrolled deforestation

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landscape and or agriculture. Many wild

animals

were hunted illegally;

moreover

, few exist

forests

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in forests

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suitable for them to survive.

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, according to research done by

environmental

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activist

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in Australia, wild species had reduced significantly over a decade. If the governments did not give any solution for

this

problem, rare

animals

would go extinct in less than 20 years.

On the other hand

, I believe that there are several serious issues related to nature that people have to deal with. Global warming,

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and water pollution are the crucial troubles people have to concern

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. All of these problems are caused by many reasons and human activities.

Firstly

, deforestation contributes a small part;

however

, the main reason is the speed of industrialization is too fast. Many

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factories were built,

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leads to a huge amount of greenhouse gas released

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the atmosphere. According to the estimates by scientists at Cornell University in the US, with the pace of industrialization now,

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temperature of the Earth will reach the mark

100

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of 100

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degrees Fahrenheit soon. After that, ice in two poles may

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dramatically, leading to unpredictable consequences. In conclusion, humanity

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to find solutions for many environmental troubles

such

as losing creatures or global warming.

Therefore

, governments need practical action immediately.