Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Dead

Sea

between Jordan and Israel was world-renowned. As one of the world’s

first

health resorts, people have travelled there /

thousands

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for thousands

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of years, wanting to experience

a

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strange salty

water

or hoping to cure various health problems. With the River Jordan as its only source

water

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of water

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, the Dead

Sea

did not flow into rivers or streams. Without a steady flow of

water

and as evaporation occurs, the saltiness near the bottom the lake increases. In fact, the Dead

Sea

almost

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ten times as salty as the ocean. Objects in salt

water

floating

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more easily than in fresh

water

, and the saltier the

water

, the heavier the floating object can be. So

this

mean

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that in the Dead

Sea

it is

nearly

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impossible

sink

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. Extreme saltiness

also

means none can grow in it,

hence

its name.

The salt

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and minerals are often used to make cosmetics and

another

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beauty products.