Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many individuals believe that prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work

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of being put behind bars. I agree with the notion

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they should be given a second chance to prove themselves.

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essay shall discuss the details of my stance with examples in subsequent paragraphs.

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with, the main advantage of making prisoners do social work is that it helps in improving the nation economically and socially.

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, inmates can be

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taught

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to make

handicrafts

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items and clean and maintain public places.

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gives them a chance to reform themselves and become productive in society.

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, inmates in Japan do support services like cleaning parks, sweeping roads and making handmade bags.

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, these activities aid the government in improving the country.

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, there are negative effects of

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trend.

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, cruel and dreaded jailbirds should be given stringent punishment for their acts of crime.

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, they may escape and create crime if they are left outside.

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, they should be jailed, so that, an example is made out of it and the community should fear committing crimes. To cite an example, as per a report, many inmates escaped prison during a social activity in China.

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, antisocial elements became free and may cause harm to society and its communities. In conclusion,

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these people may be dangerous to society, they can be used to help people by doing social welfare.

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, it is necessary to keep a proper guard on these folks and guide them to be beneficial to the community.

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Ensure that the introduction clearly outlines your stance and a preview of the main points that will be discussed in depth throughout the essay.

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Work on connecting ideas and points more coherently and use appropriate linking devices to provide a smooth progression of ideas.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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