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For some people, shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but is a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The diagram illustrates the
number
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 of
children
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 born to
women
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, who were living in Australia since 1981, aged between 40 and 44 years. Overall, almost 16% of the
women
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 have no
children
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 at present, whereas about 8.50% of them had no offspring in 1981.
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, lesser
women
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 nowadays conceive four or more
children
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, with only 11% as compared to 27.60% in 1961. In the
first
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 half of the
period
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, the
number
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 of
women
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 with no offspring rose to 9.70% in 1986, increasing more than 1%, whereas that with four or more offspring declined sharply in the
period
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 in question to 18.90%.
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, the
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 of
women
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 rearing 2
children
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 has increased by merely 7%. In the
second
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 half of the
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, the
number
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 of
women
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 with two
children
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 experienced no change during the
period
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, while that with no
children
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 rose marginally in 2006 at approximately 16%.
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 to that, the
number
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 of
women
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 rearing two or more offspring declined during the
period
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, with 33% on average as compared to 58% in 1986.
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