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To succeed in business, one needs to learn and know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that without mathematics, it is difficult to thrive in
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. Nowadays, it is necessary
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 my opinion, I believe that
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 essay I will examine them. On the one hand, being good at
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 can give
business
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 people a competitive advantage.
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 with, a person who knows how to calculate can easily
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control
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.
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 can help them to make sales growth, budget management and strategies. For
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a TV program
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 start-up potential investors,
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can demonstrate
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 of
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the
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their
business
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 calculation usually yet a chance to get a large investment.
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, I am thinking that
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 success does not depend on
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 knowledge.
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, nowadays technologies are developing. Because various calculate have been developed that
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are
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capable
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capable
of displaying
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 trend data. These tools provide insight into various financial
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related
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 and visualizations. In
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 process may depend more on
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,
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business
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third party
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 financial services that are experts in relevant areas
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companies can
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 focus on
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care
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career
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 activities
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 as producing products and increasing sales to achieve their goals. In conclusion, I agree that good knowledge of
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, I strongly believe that with the help of technology tools and financial experts,
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deep understanding
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