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The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide production per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal

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increasing trend towards producing Carbon Dioxide

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caused by Portuguese and Italian

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about 1 to almost 4 per person, respectively.

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in 2007. Britons

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