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The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide production per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal
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40 years. In general, the most CO2
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period are caused by
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UK residents,
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people who lived in Portugal caused the least air
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by a growing trend.
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to UK inhabitants, people from Italy and Portugal are experiencing
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increasing trend towards producing Carbon Dioxide
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period. In 1967, CO2
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in metric
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caused by Portuguese and Italian
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about 1 to almost 4 per person, respectively.
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,
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trend during 40 years rose about five times and doubled in order.
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, from 1967 to 1977 the fumes produced by Sweden went up slightly while
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decreased significantly to 7 metric
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in 2007. Britons
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fell gradually from 11 to 9 tonnes in the mentioned period.
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