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Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.

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Extreme
sports
 are known for their dangers to human lives, in many ,cases these
sports
cause
 severe to fatal injuries which could be considered as something to ban the sport for.
This
 could be reasonable as other things in the world have been banned for their dangers. I do not believe
this
 should be the case, since banning it will only
cause
 there to be more problems within the justice system than with
people
 actually doing these specific
sports
.
People
 enjoy
sports
 that create
adrenalin
 which causes it to be the majority favourite sport.
Adrenalin
 has a known effect on
people
's ability to create fun activities for
people
. To ,some
this
 rush of
adrenalin
 from these dangerous
sports
 can be something that satisfies their needs. Because of ,
this
 we need certain
sports
 which are dangerous to be able to satisfy the needs of individuals in our society. The creation of
adrenalin
 can
also
 be something
that is
 proven to allow
people
 to let go of stress, which improves mental health As we know from other bans in the world
such
 as the abortion ban in the USA, the only thing
this
 will
cause
 is that these
sports
 will be more dangerous as there would not be any instructors who could help
people
 achieve their enjoyment. Since we are talking about a ban
this
 would mean that it would be illegal to do
such
sports
, and as we should know
people
 will continue doing things that create
adrenalin
 bursts and enjoyment regardless of whether it is illegal to do so, the only thing that would differentiate is that the possible injuries from these
sports
 will increase as there will be no one to help and instruct the
people
. In conclusion, even if a sport is said to be extreme, we should be personally responsible for what we do with
such
sports
. It should not be banned as it will
cause
people
 to still do it but
this
 time without any instruction or help that would allow them to be safer in doing so.
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