Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is frequently believed that young adults should opt for varsity for higher specialized education.

Although

the contrasting views are

also

shared by others who think that they should be convinced to learn the art of

car

repair or building construction and work in

such

sectors to benefit their own families as well as

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society itself.

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essay will portray the reasons behind both sides of

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and

also

mention my opinion regarding

this

issue. On the one hand, young learners should go for earning a

university

degree because

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that'll

help them to gather expertise

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a particular field and

thus

serve

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society quite efficiently.

For example

, if a student who has already passed

HSC

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examination chooses to select electrical and electronic engineering (EEE) at

university

and become a competent graduate of

this

subject, can contribute to

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generation, transmission and distribution sector of any country and

hence

the society and the concerned nation can be extremely benefitted from his specialized education.

On the other hand

, young people should be encouraged to involve in several sectors that require hard

labor

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and tech knowledge

instead

of earning

higher

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a higher

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degree

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degrees

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because by doing so, they can earn

handsome

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a handsome

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wage

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wages

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and lead a happy and independent lifestyle long before

university

graduates

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graduate

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.

For example

, fresh graduates from an engineering

university

are usually offered pretty low

salary

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salaries

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far below their

expectation

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expectations

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whereas, a

car

mechanic or builder can earn relatively higher than them at that point by utilizing their years of experience and good knowledge

on

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vital

car

parts or building designs.

Finally

, in my view, I think that whether

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young adults opt for graduation or start to work as

car

mechanics or builders should rely on

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own desire as well as the socio-economic condition of their families.

For instance

, a young adult who is the only earning member of his family due to the illness of his parents

need

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no

second

invitation to join

in

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car

repair shops and earn bread and butter.

Moreover

, any person should always consider what he wants to do rather than following the advice of others. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion regarding the preference of young people to go to

university

or not, I think that

such

decision

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generally relies upon the persons’ own willingness as well as their

families’

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families

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social and financial status.