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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is frequently believed that young adults should opt for varsity for higher specialized education.
Although
 the contrasting views are
also
 shared by others who think that they should be convinced to learn the art of
car
 repair or building construction and work in
such
 sectors to benefit their own families as well as
the
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society itself.
This
 essay will portray the reasons behind both sides of
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the argument
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 and
also
 mention my opinion regarding
this
 issue. On the one hand, young learners should go for earning a
university
 degree because
this’ll
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that'll
 help them to gather expertise
on
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in
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 a particular field and
thus
 serve
the
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society quite efficiently.
For example
, if a student who has already passed
HSC
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 examination chooses to select electrical and electronic engineering (EEE) at
university
 and become a competent graduate of
this
 subject, can contribute to
electricity
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 generation, transmission and distribution sector of any country and
hence
 the society and the concerned nation can be extremely benefitted from his specialized education.
On the other hand
, young people should be encouraged to involve in several sectors that require hard
labor
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labour
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 and tech knowledge
instead
 of earning
higher
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a higher
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degree
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degrees
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 because by doing so, they can earn
handsome
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a handsome
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wage
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wages
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 and lead a happy and independent lifestyle long before
university
graduates
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graduate
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.
For example
, fresh graduates from an engineering
university
 are usually offered pretty low
salary
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salaries
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 far below their
expectation
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expectations
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 whereas, a
car
 mechanic or builder can earn relatively higher than them at that point by utilizing their years of experience and good knowledge
on
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 vital
car
 parts or building designs.
Finally
, in my view, I think that whether
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young adults opt for graduation or start to work as
car
 mechanics or builders should rely on
his
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their
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 own desire as well as the socio-economic condition of their families.
For instance
, a young adult who is the only earning member of his family due to the illness of his parents
need
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 no
second
 invitation to join
in
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car
 repair shops and earn bread and butter.
Moreover
, any person should always consider what he wants to do rather than following the advice of others. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion regarding the preference of young people to go to
university
 or not, I think that
such
decision
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 generally relies upon the persons’ own willingness as well as their
families’
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families
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 social and financial status.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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