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Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The source of headlines for an individual would vary depending on various factors. The essay will highlight
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 factors and I will try to give my perspective.
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, people who love to read more from physical papers would like to read the
news
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 from the newspaper itself rather than a phone or a television.
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,
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elderly people who are comfortable with papers and books are used to the old fashion ways. They have been following a routine of reading
everyday
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 at a certain time which they will not defy at any cost. It completely shows their comfort level. Some human beings
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 have a misconception that the reporters who are writing do not exaggerate the issue and write what is the truth.
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,
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 broadcast on television and phone is
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 not incorrect,
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, people who are more into listening and watching things like to absorb information through technology.
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, ladies and youngsters are always attracted to something that looks appealing to their eyes or ears.
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 they will always grasp headlines from
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online applications rather
reading
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than reading
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it
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them
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 from
somehwhere
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somewhere
. Few individuals have a problem with their eyes
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 rely on sources like radio to gain knowledge on what's happening in their surroundings.
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 of human beings watch the
news
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 on television just to gather topics to gossip
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about in
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 their friend circle. In conclusion, while both the sources of
news
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 are very authentic
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 it completely depends on personal choice and comfort that a person chooses the source of
news
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 for themselves.
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