Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: – Your reason for writing – What you like about the restaurant – Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Fidan Durrani and I am a food blogger. I visit different restaurants and eateries to review their food, ambience and overall experience.
Furthermore
, I visited your restaurant La Kuchina situated in Jehan-Numa Palace hotel last
Sunday and really loved the dinner and service provided. I am writing to you to share the experience I had at the restaurant, what I loved about it and a few suggestions for improvement.
First
of all the quality and taste of the meal served were absolutely amazing and the chefs were very attentive to the particular requirements of the diners , some of them had allergies while others were interested in having vegan options. All the requirements were fulfilled keenly and the flavour was not at all compromised. The value of food was also
fair enough.
A few suggestions I like to make are, there should be more space in the dining area as it was just a bit congested moreover
hampering the service. In addition
to this
, ventilation can also
be improved because of the open ,kitchen it was quite hot in the restaurant.
I will definitely visit again.
Yours sincerely,
Fidan DurraniSubmitted by shozab.ansari on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite