Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many governments are suggesting to
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and societies to transfer their offices from
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to rural
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I will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of
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politics and I will
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provide some examples. On the one hand, the relocation of industries and businesses in regional
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has several advantages.
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, our
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are overcrowded.
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began in the middle of the 20th century
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when many workers decided to leave their lands looking for new opportunities in bigger places like
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. By doing the opposite, we can create more room for citizens to have more buildings to live in, but
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the local authorities will have more space to organize public events.
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, in Dublin, many buildings are occupied by Facebook's employees and they steal the accommodation for locals and students.
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, if
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will move to rural
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, air pollution in many
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will dramatically decrease. A huge percentage of smog is caused by them.
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, many studies show that industries are the cause of 65% of air pollution in crowded
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,
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decision has
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main
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. If many
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will be relocated outside of the
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,
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will be a
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for workers, because it will take more time for them to join their job places. Highways will face problems with traffic at some hours of they, especially at 8AM and at 6PM. If governments decide to go ahead with
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decision, they have to consider the
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of traffic that it will cause.
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, in my town, every morning roads are blocked by cars of individuals who are joining their work and due to
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, school buses arrive late at school. To conclude, despite encouraging businesses and
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to move to rural
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has the
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of traffic congestion, in my
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the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because
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decision will create more room for citizens and public events, but
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will decrease air pollution in many
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • decentralization
  • sustainable development
  • infrastructure
  • quality of life
  • economic disparity
  • rural revitalization
  • overcrowding
  • resource allocation
  • talent retention
  • commuter issues
  • regional development
  • corporate relocation
  • workforce migration
  • urban-rural divide
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