Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many governments are suggesting to
companies
and societies to transfer their offices from
cities
to rural
areas
. In
this
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I will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of
this
politics and I will
also
provide some examples. On the one hand, the relocation of industries and businesses in regional
areas
has several advantages.
Firstly
, our
cities
are overcrowded.
This
problem
began in the middle of the 20th century
,
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when many workers decided to leave their lands looking for new opportunities in bigger places like
cities
. By doing the opposite, we can create more room for citizens to have more buildings to live in, but
also
the local authorities will have more space to organize public events.
For example
, in Dublin, many buildings are occupied by Facebook's employees and they steal the accommodation for locals and students.
Secondly
, if
companies
will move to rural
areas
, air pollution in many
cities
will dramatically decrease. A huge percentage of smog is caused by them.
For example
, many studies show that industries are the cause of 65% of air pollution in crowded
areas
.
On the other hand
,
this
decision has
a
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main
problem
. If many
companies
will be relocated outside of the
cities
,
this
will be a
problem
for workers, because it will take more time for them to join their job places. Highways will face problems with traffic at some hours of they, especially at 8AM and at 6PM. If governments decide to go ahead with
this
decision, they have to consider the
problem
of traffic that it will cause.
For instance
, in my town, every morning roads are blocked by cars of individuals who are joining their work and due to
this
, school buses arrive late at school. To conclude, despite encouraging businesses and
companies
to move to rural
areas
has the
problem
of traffic congestion, in my
opinion
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the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because
this
decision will create more room for citizens and public events, but
also
will decrease air pollution in many
cities
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • decentralization
  • sustainable development
  • infrastructure
  • quality of life
  • economic disparity
  • rural revitalization
  • overcrowding
  • resource allocation
  • talent retention
  • commuter issues
  • regional development
  • corporate relocation
  • workforce migration
  • urban-rural divide
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