Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outlook. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While designing a building, two of the major components that an architect keeps in mind, are
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utilities and
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view of the building. In
opinion
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of some individuals, architects should put more emphasis on the functionality of a building
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appearance of it. I completely agree with
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notion because users of the building will be benefited from the functionality of the building which will eventually keep them using the space in the long run. To elaborate
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viewpoint, it has been observed that
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of a building is the most important aspect of a building.
This
is because, people who are going to purchase or rent a building, will always look for suitable space to meet their
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.
For example
, if a family has a disabled or old member, a building which has ramps or elevators will be
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preferable
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a building which does not have any.
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, designers of
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the building
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building
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should give ultimate importance
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usefulness
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of the building while making the blueprint.
However
, the outer design of the building is
also
a significant point because people are attracted to a building at
first
by looking at its outside ambient.
For instance
, the parliament house of Bangladesh is one of the most visited tourist places
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the country due to its unique design.
Hence
, the outlook of a building is a valuable aspect
in addition
to its purpose. To conclude, in my opinion, it is important that architects design a building in a way which enhances
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utility of that building in
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place and
then
consider
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it to increase
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value of the building.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetics
  • Architecture
  • Cost-effective
  • Design principles
  • Eco-friendly
  • Facade
  • Infrastructure
  • Innovative
  • Landmark
  • Sustainability
  • Urban planning
  • Utilitarian function
  • Visual appeal
  • Cultural heritage
  • Economic development
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