Nowadays, more and more older people who need employonment compete with the younger people for the same jobs?

It is
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true
sure
ture
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true
that the
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competition
competion
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competition
is
more and more stiff
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between young and old employees in
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workplace nowadays. There
are
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multifarious
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that may
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by
this
issue, and various measures can be taken to improve
this
situation. On the one hand,
this
issue will bring negative impacts for both
youngsters
and elders. When young
people
have to compete with old
people
who have more experience
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might
result
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many
youngsters
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to find jobs. Under
this
situation, there will be increasing unemployment among junior workers, and because of joblessness,
youngsters
may lack money to pay their living expenses,
therefore
some of them might go astray to commit crimes to get money,
such
as robbing and selling drugs to live from day to day.
However
, there are
also
some senior workers
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be replaced by
young
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workforce and be left on the
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in
workplace
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due to their poor job performance caused by health deterioration. And without
dequate
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adequate
financial means to support themselves to keep their original living standards.
On the other hand
, there are still numerous solutions that could tackle
this
problem.
First
of all, companies should offer more job opportunities special for
youngsters
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position
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like management trainee, that received specialized training by
corporation
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a corporation
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to acquire all
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knowledge
konwledge
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knowledge
and skills to become
future
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manager. In
this
way, not only could help young
people
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but
also
they could contribute a lot to the company.
In addition
,
government
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should provide sufficient social benefits for older
people
to allow them to retire without losing their
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standards
standard
standrads
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standards
of living.
For example
, healthcare
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and medical insurance
to
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guarantee that they will live
healtily
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healthily
for the rest of their lives. In conclusion, even though the competition is fierce among
youngsters
and elders and caused some challenges to both of them, there are some effective methods
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address these problems.
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