Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).

Some peoples argue that due to the advent of technology pupils get more

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than in traditional classrooms,

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institutions. While others advocate that nothing can surpass the teacher's interactions with students. I believe that teachers are important in

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life we can not have an alternative

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elaborate on both views in the following paragraphs. Admittedly, it is true that we can have a lot of

information

from websites rather than

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understanding

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it is

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not possible to act differently as per the capability of children.

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and required

information

. For ,example a survey conducted on UK students , found that those who attend

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training are found to be more competent than others.

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teaching more viable than the other mode of learning. Another debatable point is that while using

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online there is no monitoring

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adolescents.

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it is uncontrollable what offspring are doing during their learning hours,

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may lead to detrimental effects

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as their access to porn sites or they may be trapped by hackers.

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learning students.

Hence

I Assert that it is always better to have a traditional

classroom

to make constructive progress in the student learning curve. In Conclusion,

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available sites for online learning. ,

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it is not always found viable

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