In my countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society.

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The number of older
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is getting higher especially in the developed countries in comparison with
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world countries. But both nowadays older
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suffering or complaining from less caring and respect. While the right concept
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level of
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must have high-quality health and mental
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. So, due to
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problem, many consequences will present and face families and communities out there
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as no more family boundaries and caring. On the one hand, children's responsibility has a big role.
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, due to immigration or moving of youth
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for working, studying and building their kids future. Parents stayed alone and as getting older solely, as well, the feeling of neglect and sadness started to occur. And
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, they start to have medical problems
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as sudden Alzheimer's or heart attacks the most common diseases aged
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suffer from these days,
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, the uncaring kids that are close to their parent's homes but they kept giving excuses for multitasks they had and the big responsibilities they have. For
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they just kept telling them will come
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week and the other week and maybe a month will pass just because they didn't have any priority over his/her parents
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is so sad.
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, government responsibility
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must take a big role in taking
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of aged
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, for those old
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despite their situation.
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, they must have medical insurance that covers everything in and out of the hospital, as well, they must have every six months medical check-up and sessions like mental talks in the fresh air
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will give them the advantage that they are not alone and will meet new
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from the same age.
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, homeless old
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must be sequin for the ae in a building shelter. For
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, homeless elderly
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are affected mentally and physically so they need extra
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because they have tragedic stories that lead them to be without a home or any type of
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either from close family members or friends. To conclude, we all will be old one day so we must put our parents or family members our priority, we must ask as much as we can live is too short to neglect our family members' feelings and essentials
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, it's more than caring we will decrease the bad consequences on
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group of elderly
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, raising the mental awareness, increasing the sharing and the loving concept between each other
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social structures
  • nuclear families
  • extended family
  • intergenerational respect
  • dual-income households
  • technological advancements
  • perception
  • value shifts
  • vigor
  • innovation
  • increased mobility
  • neglected
  • mental health
  • generational divide
  • misunderstandings
  • stereotypes
  • social fabric
  • healthcare strain
  • inadequate care
  • quality of life
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