Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are two dissimilar viewpoints about advertising, the
first
group reckons that advertising has been being
one of the most crucial Unnecessary verb
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factor
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factors
of
making more profits for businesses, Change preposition
in
however
, the other section of world's
population look at advertisements as Correct article usage
the world's
an
usual Change the article
a
things
which does not have any attractions for consumers. And I firmly follow the initial view, and in my point of view, well-known companies and businesses are able to keep running more than unknown ones.
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thing
To begin
with, success
of companies is a combination of elements Add an article
the success
that
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apply
its
crucial part is Correct your spelling
is
an
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in
advertisement
, due to a
plethora of customers that it brings for them. Correct article usage
the
For instance
, the first
branch of KFC
chain fast-food restaurants had been opened in Correct article usage
the KFC
Kentaky
rural area which was not Correct your spelling
Kentucky
big
name at all, Add an article
a big
furthermore
, it was on the edge of bankruptcy because of their
limited users. Correct pronoun usage
its
Therefore
, in spite of the horrible financial circumstance they were in, the manager got heavy loans from American banks for payments of advertising in
all platforms, Change preposition
on
such
as billboards, TV shows, newspapers etc. Eventually
it Add a comma
,Eventually
has
paid them off and it is obvious that Unnecessary verb
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KFC
brand is one of the most popular restaurants all over the world.
While there are a bunch of brands around the world which have come up successfully due to Correct article usage
the KFC
the
efficient Correct article usage
apply
advertisement
, the idea that argues advertising is time and finance wasting
and Add a hyphen
finance-wasting
it
can not attract individuals to brands Correct pronoun usage
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is still existed
because they are not aware of modern and eclectic Change to the active voice
still exists
has still existed
methos
of advertising, like the quality of services or goods of a business which is the most reliable type of advertisements. As an example, there is a supermarket in my Correct your spelling
methods
neighborhood
, whereas it has never printed or Change the spelling
neighbourhood
upload
advertising in social media or Wrong verb form
uploaded
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newspapers
newpapers
, all the dwellers purchase their needs from there, due to its positive reputation that has been Correct your spelling
newspapers
spreaded
in our place, and in my opinion, it is his costless Correct your spelling
spread
advertisement
which it the supermarket did not have high-quality goods, it would not earn a large amount of money and profits.
In conclusion, although
an advertisement
has adherents and Correct your spelling
opponents
oponents
, I believe that even the Correct your spelling
opponents
second
group knows that no businesses
should run without high-quality Fix the agreement mistake
business
of
services, which is the most useful way of advertising, they just do not agree that it is an Change preposition
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advertisement
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