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Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information beacuse they have more influence than other forms of media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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We are living in a world surrounded by
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.
News
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 can be anywhere by all types of
media
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. While some claim that Newspapers are still the best channel to deliver
news
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 to other forms of
media
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, I totally disagree with
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 statement since the internet has replaced it to become the most influential method of
information
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 sharing.
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 of all,
news
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 can be shared and spread throughout the world through the accessibility and convenience of people using the internet.
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, we can know the result of the election of the United States president from Twitter, while we can even constantly know the progress of countings every minute. The continuing updates on the web show its competitiveness among the old-styled
media
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,
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 as newspaper, which is published on a daily basis when things can be changed in hours. The constantly changing environment is no longer bringing advantages to printed materials, and so digital
information
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 has come up to become the most popular channel to acquire updates.
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, the evolution of
media
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 brought by the internet has put newspapers behind. When
news
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 can be reached on phones and computers, reports can be delivered in many forms of content. For
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instant, television programs would reform the crime scene through animation, or even
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 reporters can interact with the screen to deliver a subtracted concept in an easier way for the audience to understand.
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, printed papers can only be presented in wording or a few figures, it will be less attractive to draw the attention of the readers. And so people will prefer not reading
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 on paper. To sum up, I have objected to the statement that newspaper is still the most influential mean of
media
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. It has been slowly fading out while the other kinds of channels, which can be adapted and welcomed by the audiences nowadays, are more influencing ways of
information
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 sharing.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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