A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I trust you are doing well. The purpose of
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letter is to express my interest in part-time volunteering at the Toronto Art Museum located downtown.
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a chance to serve our community.
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have experience working as a Tour Guide in a local company for over a period of six months.
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volunteer position after 6 PM on the weekdays and from 7 AM to 3 PM on the weekends.
I hope that I have met all your expectations for the role of a part-time volunteer at the Toronto Art Museum, and cannot wait to hear from you.
Sincerely,
Ruchin PatelLinking Words
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The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriate and contribute well to the formal tone required.
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Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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