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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cites and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

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Old people in the countryside are going to be alone because some youngsters are leaving their homes in the countryside to live in urbane. The problem of being solely grand people in
villages
 is caused by the leaving of youths and can result in decreasing the number of youth forces in the countryside. The possible solutions to
this
 issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, if a lot of old-age people live in cities out of town, as they are not able to use all of their power for some hard work or even the easy ones, they will live in a difficult situation and may die sooner.
Moreover
, when folks get old, they need their children's attention. It is just like they're spending their time in their childhood and need care.
In addition
, old-age parents get illnesses easier than others, so their children should take care of them.
First
 of all, if there would not an acceptable job requirement for youths to live in their own city and they decide to leave it, they can bring their parents with them to the new town. But if they couldn't get along with spendings of new life in a town, they can employ a nurse for their parent to be there for them in their hometown. left your parents behind and hardly ever coming to visit them, would make their heart hurt and in some ,situations if they become ill, you may not be informed and for so many years you feel sorry about your decision.
Secondly
, the government can arrange some volunteer work for those who are interested
such
 as students or youths to go to the
villages
 and help old residents.
Furthermore
, they can encourage the volunteers by paying them or they can organize some kind of social positions for them to be useful in their future careers and have a positive effect on that. As discussed in the above paragraphs, the problem of living only with old residents in
villages
 is caused by young individuals who leave their hometown and can cause in not using the natural sources of
villages
 in the right way and declining the figures of youth-power.
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