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Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?

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In recent times, there are a lot of opinions about
education
 in our life. Some people think the purpose of
education
 is to prepare the
future
 workforce and make good members of society
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 why there are many good universities with strict disciplines. Others think the purpose of
education
 should lead to
self-fulfillment
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.  In my
opinion
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education
 must be available for all mankind and everyone can achieve the tops in his aims.
First
 of all, not only rich people should get high
education
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well-paid
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 job in
their
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future
. We may provide access for everybody in the whole world. Humanity could prepare
the
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 best
future
 with
help
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good
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 and strong
education
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programmes
programs
programms
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programs
.
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 of all, it goes without saying a good
education
it
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is not only useful for
the
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preparing
future
 workforce
,
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also
 it is make our society
more
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better
,
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 because smart people can create smart things for developing our life. In
conclusion
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 I want to say that our
future
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 our hands,
only
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and only
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 we can change the world.
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