Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is noticed, few
people
believe that there is a need
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a new
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language
within
international
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the international
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community for interaction. There are few benefits
for
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inventing a new
language
, whereas there are multiple issues, which can be raised based on the same decision. In my
opinion
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there are more pros as compared to
the
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cons.
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essay will explain about the disadvantages overweigh the advantages
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new
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a new
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communication
language
. Reasonable and beneficial change is extremely important in society. There are multiple issues, which can be faced across the globe in case of
new
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international
language
is introduced.
Firstly
,
process
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is extremely slow to understand the
language
which included writing, reading, speaking and listening, especially
adults
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, who will consume time to upgrade their
language
skills.
This
will downgrade buying power, as
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people
will interact due to limited
language
skills, which
further
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of the country. As per the survey in the New York
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economy
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of
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countries in the
last
decade declines, because of no understanding of
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new international
language
.
Secondly
, there are
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social interactions for
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years in public, which leads to
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human depression in
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society because, human is a social
animal
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and always need some
language
to interact
within
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with
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their friends, relatives, and professional work.
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,
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countries
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depression rate
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as they start adapting
new
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to new
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international
language
.
This
shows that
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there are
repercussion
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faced by human
being
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beings
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due to
new
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a new
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language
introduction in society. On the other side, few benefits are noticed for
new
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a new
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language
in case
first
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the first
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international
language
is not understandable in some countries. It can save
people
in case of urgencies and using
new
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invented
language
which is understandable by both
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parties. It will allow
the
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people
to communicate.
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Many
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demands were decreased due to
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of
new
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a new
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language
. In conclusion,
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of
new
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a new
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language
needs to evaluate based on pros and cons. I believe that there are more disadvantages
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advantages based. It is based on the
people
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people's
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decision to invent a new international
language
for communication.
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