With the development of only communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?.
There are different opinions about in recent years, technology has entered our daily balance of online and offline communication. I personally believe, giving time to our near and dear ones is important we should prioritize
life
. It affects the quality of our social life
. Also
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life
. People can able to make new friends bad will never be alone.
To commence with the view on the former group, there are two reasons behind their position. First
is that there are some benefits online communication bring
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Consequently
, we would never feel alone. Also
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. Definitely, other arguments exist too, but the ones mentioned, I believe do stand out.
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have their own grounds to justify the position they hold. First
of all online communication may chances
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life
. Although
, we have a lot of closes in virtual life
. They could not be with us all the time. In contrast
, in real life
, they can always be with us when we need them. For example
, I recently had an accident, my school friends helped me in hospital
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